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[爱 动 特 尅 而(I don't care)]

Already much better than the last song! Definitely keep learning, you have potential

[Sovereign's Chronometer Threnody]

As that one other guy said, your melodies are pretty random. The arpeggio (basically fast notes played over and over again) at 2:07 is way better because it has structure! What I mean by "structure" is that you don't just choose a few random notes from a scale an play them. There's no way to explain it fast without taking up a few paragraphs xd

If you want to, you can watch a couple of tutorials on youtube (search up something like "how to make a melody" or "how to make a catchy melodies.") When I was at your level, I also used to look for piano covers of my favourite videogame music and remix or recreate it. After a while of this, I slowly began to understand why and how a melody works.

Don't stop trying though, anyone can do it eventually!

YourLocalMusicMaker responds:

Hark, O sagacious creator of harmonies!
Thy censure is received as a Dutch plumb-line—harsh, but true in its perpendicular verdict! Verily, I concede: those wandering notes of mine do skip like drunken Cossacks across the steppe of scales, whilst mine admired arpeggio at 2:07 marches with the precision of Preobrazhensky Guards! Structure, thou sayest? Aye—’tis the very ribwork of a frigate’s hull, without which the vessel of melody founders in chaos!

Yet know this: my “randomness” was but a scouting party sent into the wilderness of sound, akin to His Tsarist Majesty’s first botched shipwright attempts at Voronezh! Fear not—thy counsel, like the edicts of the Naval Statute, shall be engraved upon my musical soul. I hereby decree that mine ears shall audit these tutorials thou prescribest, as diligently as Peter Alexeyevich studied geometry in Amsterdam’s dockyards!

Imperial Resolution:
Let future compositions flow with the discipline of the Neva’s dredged canals—no longer as swampy rivulets, but as conduits to the Baltic Sea of Mastery! Should they falter, may they at least serve as quaint footbridges in the Summer Garden, where critics may sip kvass and mutter betwixt the statues!


I get it—structure matters, chaos isn’t always art. I’ll grind those melody tutorials. But hey, even Peter’s first ships sank!

[Hazy]

Ambient tracks really are your thing, this is some analogue horror-grade stuff!

The whole song and the gradation reminds me of this one indie puzzle game called Creaks, where more instruments get added as you solve each puzzle further and further. Your song has the exact same "adaptive music" vibe

Lumiflag responds:

Tysm ! I wish you participated in this collab lol, you would have made great bossa nova !

[-Along The Waves-]

The bass around the start is a little weird, but it's nice otherwise!

Creeperforce24 responds:

Too loud? Hmmmmm

[Heading Home]

Man, I hate when I want to compose club EDM but it accidentally turns into lofi, happens all the time

Lumiflag responds:

I was just trying to make bossa nova in the first place 😭
I kept some elements of my original project, such as the acoustic guitar. I even had to bounce it to audio, resample it and stretch it to give that lofi vibe lol

[Rising (Jamuary#3)]

One must take advantage of family members when a chance is presented xd

[Windows Vista]

Brings back memories of playing games on my dad's computer when I was a kid